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  • Lyric Poetry Re: Spending the Rest of my life <3

    Hi :) Overall, I think this poem was quite nice with just a few things sorted out. That's when my love for you started and came alive. Quite frankly, this ...

    Nov 9, 2010
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Advice?!

    Well, you'll have to begin with thinking of a genre opposite to the one of your 'other' story. Then, to get a clear picture of what you want, you could ...

    Nov 6, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: A battle won

    Hii (: Here to review :) Well, I must say, this poem is very beautiful. I felt really sad as the narrator talked about the bruises and how the girl ...

    Nov 6, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: A battle won

    Hii (: Here to review :) Well, I must say, this poem is very beautiful. I felt really sad as the narrator talked about the bruises and how the girl ...

    Nov 6, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Widow (EDITED VERSION #1 Pls review!)

    THE WIDOW Today you were murdered. Fourteen years ago on this very day. It doesn't feel like such a long time has passed. It feels like the police officer was ...

    Nov 5, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Clothes

    HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHA MASTERPIECE! x

    Oct 18, 2010
  • Writing Tips Re: Killing off Characters?

    Hmm...I think I'll be facing the same situation in the novel I'm working on currently but that won't have to be faced for quite some time. I'd suggest to kill ...

    Sep 27, 2010
  • Homework Help Re: Home work help!

    Err...what genre?

    Sep 26, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: A new beginning

    Hello, let's begin with the reviewing. Nothing. Is all I can use to describe what’s around me. The beginning is not quite appealing this way; it kind of makes the ...

    Sep 13, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Sadist

    WOw..JUST WOW! The list of contradictions just made me want to cry out of bitter delight! I was so "in to" this poem, I didn't even care for looking at ...

    Sep 13, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The End

    Thank you so much :) Well, basically, the novel revolves around three female characters, leading seperate lives (unaware of each others' existence). As the story unfolds, the reader will be ...

    Sep 13, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: NEW!

    Haha thanks! Yeah, its been a while but now I'm back..for good! :D

    Sep 12, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The End

    This is just something I wrote up while I was thinking of some ideas for a novel. I've started on the novel and this is the prologue but I decided ...

    Sep 12, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Divine Chaos

    Hey! Okay, let's start. I ran up the stairs to get to the bottom I guess you did that on purpose. It actually sounds nice. w h ere I found ...

    Sep 10, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Under My Skin

    Let's start off! I really liked the concept of your work here; someone (whoever that is to you) right there so close to you, "under your skin". Let me introduce ...

    Sep 8, 2010


When a person tells you you hurt them, you don't get to decide you didn't.
— Louis C. K.