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Re: Spending the Rest of my life <3
Hi :) Overall, I think this poem was quite nice with just a few things sorted out. That's when my love for you started and came alive. Quite frankly, this ...
Nov 9, 2010 -
Re: Advice?!
Well, you'll have to begin with thinking of a genre opposite to the one of your 'other' story. Then, to get a clear picture of what you want, you could ...
Nov 6, 2010 -
Re: A battle won
Hii (: Here to review :) Well, I must say, this poem is very beautiful. I felt really sad as the narrator talked about the bruises and how the girl ...
Nov 6, 2010 -
Re: A battle won
Hii (: Here to review :) Well, I must say, this poem is very beautiful. I felt really sad as the narrator talked about the bruises and how the girl ...
Nov 6, 2010 -
Re: The Widow (EDITED VERSION #1 Pls review!)
THE WIDOW Today you were murdered. Fourteen years ago on this very day. It doesn't feel like such a long time has passed. It feels like the police officer was ...
Nov 5, 2010 -
Re: Clothes
HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHA MASTERPIECE! x
Oct 18, 2010 -
Re: Killing off Characters?
Hmm...I think I'll be facing the same situation in the novel I'm working on currently but that won't have to be faced for quite some time. I'd suggest to kill ...
Sep 27, 2010 -
Re: Home work help!
Err...what genre?
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: A new beginning
Hello, let's begin with the reviewing. Nothing. Is all I can use to describe what’s around me. The beginning is not quite appealing this way; it kind of makes the ...
Sep 13, 2010 -
Re: Sadist
WOw..JUST WOW! The list of contradictions just made me want to cry out of bitter delight! I was so "in to" this poem, I didn't even care for looking at ...
Sep 13, 2010 -
Re: The End
Thank you so much :) Well, basically, the novel revolves around three female characters, leading seperate lives (unaware of each others' existence). As the story unfolds, the reader will be ...
Sep 13, 2010 -
Re: NEW!
Haha thanks! Yeah, its been a while but now I'm back..for good! :D
Sep 12, 2010 -
Re: The End
This is just something I wrote up while I was thinking of some ideas for a novel. I've started on the novel and this is the prologue but I decided ...
Sep 12, 2010 -
Re: Divine Chaos
Hey! Okay, let's start. I ran up the stairs to get to the bottom I guess you did that on purpose. It actually sounds nice. w h ere I found ...
Sep 10, 2010 -
Re: Under My Skin
Let's start off! I really liked the concept of your work here; someone (whoever that is to you) right there so close to you, "under your skin". Let me introduce ...
Sep 8, 2010
